My Favorite Spacing Out History Planet
I loved the game.
Gotta say this book has potential to be decent with characters, story etc. Just spelling mistakes, grammar all over the place. It's really off putting to the reader, if this was checked over correctly it might be a decent read. But still for the price what so you expect?
There's a lot of grammar errors and mispellings. There also aren't any checkpoints or savepoints, which isn't great considering that in certain scenarios, you can die instantly.
Some of the most piss poor writing I've experienced in a while. Even if you ignore the technical issues, like bad grammar and misspellings, the author often just leaves out information, or just completely underwhelms you with every aspect of the world they try to create. So boring.
it seemed to jump around a bit and it was very easy for me to get lost.
While there where lots of small typos and mistakes, I love the story, the endings, and best of all, it's free! I love this story and I recommend it.
Interesting, but very confusing.
I finished the game........it was really painful
Like many of the other comments, I like it, but the grammer mistakes and bad sentences just makes it hard to read. Try cleaning it up a bit and it would be the best story yet